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Do you remember me blabbering about some English Assignment? Here is the Name Poem I wrote:

It's an Adventure! she shouted.
Time had come for the departure
Zealous she was about flying
Everytime she went to the airport
Laughter started between tears... saying good bye was never easy!

And so, she entered the plane,
Nervous she was now, the flight would start anytime:
Given the situation, she wouldn't cry
Effort was needed, it was a hard try.
Look at the window, her mother said
Evoking home, the airport was,
Soon the flight would start.

And, that was my fantastic writing :D
ok... i'm going~
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Remember about my oneshot? well, writer's block attacked and... and... I just can't write my ending D:
Writer's block? how can I say that? It was pure laziness...
I don't know... I believe it's well-written, it's less than a word page (and page and a half of hand-writing D: )
I can't commit to a goal, I can't... How many times have I promised a drawing, and it's just been started? how many times have I told to myself to write at least a page of Magical Flavors/Ojamajo Hana? How many times have I told myself to open photoshop and make some graphics? Next I'll say: I get out of school in November, then I'll finish all those things... But, how can I make sure I'll do them? *sigh*

Anyway, I HAVE to finish the oneshot, with or without beta by Friday... Let's see if I can make that deadline, for myself's sake .-.'

Hum... the other day, in English we had to make a Name Poem... You know, me being bad for rhyming and that stuff in general... I ended using my name and surname to make a short story poem about a girl who is about to get in a plane. Guess what's the first line? 'It's an Adventure!' she shouted.
Referencing LJ too much? anyway, It's an Adventure are my first three initials (name, middle name and surname). I couldn't get anything with V to have my whole name, but I guess that is better than nothing. nonsensical writing... )
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so, yeah... I'll finish a one-shot fic soon, probably tonight.
And, well, I'm not really sure about my grammar there, and there are some things I would want to get checked by someone before publishing here/at dA.
Uhm, basically, I am humbly asking for a beta reader... Not necessarily only one. So anyone? It's (of course) in English, it's friendship/romance...
etc. I'll wait patiently for someone... even if I know someone won't come.
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Well, I read a classical book: Frankenstein.

I believe you all know the story: Dr. Victor Frankenstein gets obssessed with the creation of a human being. Instead, he creates a monster (who, by the way, remains unnamed the whole story). The monster wants to make Frankenstein as miserable as he feels, so starts killing all his loved ones, starting by his littlest brother. The story is told by Dr. Frankenstein, just before he fell sick and died.

tl;dr it's the story of a man who played to be God, but after making his creation, he became scared of it. The monster felt everything a human felt, but was ugly, really ugly.

I liked it. It didn't made me sleepy, as Cervantes can make me .-.
Anyway, if it was a terror story, I wasn't scared. Not even a bit. And being me the scary mouse I am, well...

And Friday...

We're practicing for school's festival (specifically, the dance festival, aka Comparsas). Today, we had to practice under the rain, because we were practicing in the playground (?) of the school. The storm started, and we were afraid of losing the practice, until we were given permission to keep dancing under the rain.

After it ended, we were all wet and dripping, but we felt so~ good...
a lot of us didn't bring clothes to change, so they had to wait till the air dried them. Me, fortunately, did bring more clothes C:
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I don't understand... When a book is one of the things most popular right now, it gets to be a stupid, love story plain book. And guess what's the name of it? Yeah, Twilight. You may be asking, why do you don't like that book? I'll tell you why. First of all, look at the characters. They're too plain. Way too plain. I think, what makes a good book, aren't perfect characters, but characters that have as many flaws as virtues. Look at Artemis Fowl. He IS a charismatic character. Or Harry Potter, he also acts like what he is, a human. And you may say that Edward Cullen isn't human, but still, he has to have flaws, right?
Second... I know it's a love story, but... almost all the book is 'Oh, I love you so much, Edward', and 'I love you more, Bella'... Yuck! And you know what? Normally, when two teenagers are in love with each other, they tend to act shy and awkward! Where was all that awkwardness? Oh my god...
Third: Bella doesn't have a personality. She may be perfect (except for her clumsiness... but that's a bit... eh...), but... She was made like a damsel in distress! Really, this book gives boys the idea that we are weak beings. Zettai Arienai!
Fourth, I don't know if I will get published, but I'm sure I write better than Stephenie Meyer. She writes like a teenager! (And I'm a teenager). Her book could only be liked by plastic girls like my classmates, who haven't read anything better. I need a treatment full of Poe, Doyle, Alcott, Dahl... Nyaaaaaaaa! But, ya know something? I wrote a lot... *feels satisfied* See you in a few minutes if you are lucky XP

Next, in Life Oddities: I CAN write with abreviatures(or however its written)


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